TranceCreations's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[F&P - My Very First Flash]

Excellent

Well drawn. I love to see consistent style throughout an animation.
Good work on choosing that voice effect for the "tornado guy". It worked perfectly.

A little to many "F" words for my taste. People appreciate not over using profane language. Creative dialogue goes a long way. Alternatives...gotta love 'em.

Haihaine responds:

Thanks for the review! The usage of "F"-words was actually supposed to be a characteristic of the main role (admittedly a cheap one), and I didn't really intend to put so many profanities in there... it just went that way when I wrote the dialogue for the blonde guy. =P

But! After watching it again with your review in mind, I do agree that it's not a necessary thing and that it might put off some viewers. If I do another one, I'll cut down on the F-words, so... thank you for a constructive review! ;)

(He will still curse more than the average person, though)

[Bye-Bye, Bulby]

Great Environment

I enjoyed the your style of animation. Ash's new look suits him well, but he has a bit of a language problem...well...not anymore obviously.

Everything was well put together. What looked the best however was the wooded background. What inspired the look of that background? It looks very familiar.

JoyPig1990 responds:

Thanks. I'm not sure what you're thinking of that reminds you of that background, though. I used a blur filter to make it look good without having to add much detail.

[NEW LIFE- English version]

Great shots

Everything was between simple and detailed. I enjoyed to color choices. All matched with each scene.
My only criticism is that the characters movement was too robotic.
Did you use motion tweens for much of the movement? It sure looks that way.

SOMNAMBULA responds:

absolutely right, there are a lot of motion tween animation , but this is my style!