Excellent
Well drawn. I love to see consistent style throughout an animation.
Good work on choosing that voice effect for the "tornado guy". It worked perfectly.
A little to many "F" words for my taste. People appreciate not over using profane language. Creative dialogue goes a long way. Alternatives...gotta love 'em.
Thanks for the review! The usage of "F"-words was actually supposed to be a characteristic of the main role (admittedly a cheap one), and I didn't really intend to put so many profanities in there... it just went that way when I wrote the dialogue for the blonde guy. =P
But! After watching it again with your review in mind, I do agree that it's not a necessary thing and that it might put off some viewers. If I do another one, I'll cut down on the F-words, so... thank you for a constructive review! ;)
(He will still curse more than the average person, though)
Great shots
Everything was between simple and detailed. I enjoyed to color choices. All matched with each scene.
My only criticism is that the characters movement was too robotic.
Did you use motion tweens for much of the movement? It sure looks that way.
absolutely right, there are a lot of motion tween animation , but this is my style!
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